eshda3wa
July 9, 2008
Between Them
i always wanted to sleep in their bed.
between them
next to her
next to him
but they never let me
it never happened
no where in my mind exist a memory of me
nuzzled up between them
the safest place in the world
and now i am between them
but its not safe
its a war zone
and when night comes
and i have to get in bed
get between them
I am afraid,
I dread the moment my skin touches the soft covers
my head gently placed upon the pillow
I dread the smell of my sweet scented hair.
I wait for the sun to come up
my skin crawling
I need to get out
but I cant
I'm the prisoner of my own desires.
35 Comments:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
VERY NICE AND SAD :( , :) << COZ ITS NICE AND SAD GET IT :p
LOOOOL
hmm.. what's troubling you? what are those hidden desires?! I sometimes loathe the idea of going to sleep because once I place my head on the pillow my mind starts ticking, the past - the present and the future.. I hate it
is this fiction?
r u talking about ur parents?
???
ain't we all sista!
beebooo
lol
:*
chika
exactly
too much thinking
DR
i think id rather let u wonder
silver
ekh
:/
fourme
:*
7abeeeeebti :* *HUG* I know how you feel babe im there too.
Creative :)
Sometimes in bed under the covers is the safest and most peaceful place to be, other times it's just awful because you get to think about things you want to put behind you.
you write so beautifully.
oooooh how sad
liked the poem i feel you.
That has a very very very mysterious vibe.... awesome!
Everyone should feel safe ^^
Very powerful!
I hope things get better.. :)
**HUG** :)
cheer up! :)
ur parents ? why is it not safe any more:/
My favorite lines:
I wait for the sun to come up
my skin crawling
I need to get out
but I cant
I'm the prisoner of my own desires.
huh i'm kind of lost in here!! :/
drink redbull will give u wings!
jus leave
The worst thing is when they both exist but not together, you'd live the life of an orphan without being an orphan, can't have either of them when they both are here, screwed up.
eee i get that too most times, it sucks! reminds me of that nicole kidman bed drowning scene in ''the hours''
Really nice words...but I still cant get it!!!
Bas 7elow =)
yekhrebaaaita ;p
:( ....
woah! i haven't read something that well-written in a long time. The emotions are just bursting everywhere.
Love it
where did this come from....and what's it about?????
or 3ala golat Sarah McLachlan "I am drunk in my desire"
Nice post!
beautifully written i loved it, bs u mean ur parents sa7?
very touching.. in a sad way
eul
*HUG*
aurous
its a struggle
batoul
thanks
big pearls
;)
soul
it is!
paula
thank u
hamitaf
glad u likd it
inoor
*hug*
g
too bad not everybody does
irise
me too
dandoon
*hug*
shahad
that life
ame
glad u enjoyed it
zam
redbull wont solve this
blasha
cant
themcode
yes it is
hamood
exactly!
km
atleast u think its 7elo
chowwies
bait mino :p
grey
:(
jawa
gladu felt it
asoom
somewhere deep
ansam
sa7 elsan sarah
enchant
maybe
maybe not
fasti
yeah its supposed to be sad
{hugs}
I totally understand, been there done that ... all I can say YOU can never please either, keep your distance and just listen and never interfere, it is HARD but surprisingly time does heal all and has a funny way of sorting things out but it took a reaaaallly LONG time. Allah ye3enich
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