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September 11, 2008

The Day I Beat Up My Fathers Girlfriend II


*read part 1 in previous post*

As the elevator doors shut, I could feel my temperature rising. I was aware of every breath I took. Short and sharp. My heart thudded in my ears. I looked down at my hands, my nails long and jagged. Good I thought. With me playing Sherlock Holmes the past few weeks I had no time to go get a manicure.
Ding!
The sound of the elevator door opening bought me back to reality. I stood in front of apartment twenty three. The door leading to my hell. I rang the door bell. I could hear noise from the other side, but no one answered. So i rang it again and again.
Maybe the guard was mistaken maybe this isn't the apartment. I searched through my phone book for the number i took from my fathers phone and called. The nokia tune rang loud on the other side of the door.
That's it. That bitch is gonna get it.
I started banging on the door and she finally answered.
Wearing the ugliest pair of pants I have ever seen.

Are you mervat i asked?

Yes who are you

Your worst freaking nightmare bitch!

I don't know what over came me, my hatred for her, or my hatred for my father.
But you must know this. I beat the living shit out of her!
I kicked and I clawed and pulled.
I turned her eyes blue, her nose red.
I was acting like a lunatic, like everything my mama taught me not to be, and it felt damn good!
The bitch threatened to go to the police, as I stood over her my energy spent. I looked down at her and so defiantly said. Go to the police, I want you to go to the police! Hell ill even drive you there myself!
I left the apartment and by the time I got home.
My dad knew what i had done.


* *do you guys want to know how her father reacted? or is the exciting part over?
posted by eshda3wa at 12:00 AM

66 Comments:

Father's reaction please!

September 11, 2008 at 12:05 AM  

Yes yes, more! All you are missing is a trailer and shot gun!

September 11, 2008 at 12:11 AM  

wadaha to the police... willa theba7ha?

September 11, 2008 at 12:11 AM  

okhhh gad3a lol... you may continue :D

September 11, 2008 at 12:12 AM  

Yes yessss we want to know!

September 11, 2008 at 12:14 AM  

How???

September 11, 2008 at 12:19 AM  

oh my god it's definitely not over.. do continue!

September 11, 2008 at 12:20 AM  

yes for sure want want to know :P

September 11, 2008 at 12:27 AM  

we want to know =)

September 11, 2008 at 12:36 AM  

I want to know the father's reaction.

September 11, 2008 at 12:39 AM  

For sure we wanna knw !!
plz dnt tell me 3a9ab 3leeha 3ashan ma atnrfaz

September 11, 2008 at 12:58 AM  

7aaaaaaaaaaaaadi I want to know what her father did/said to her!!!!!!!!

September 11, 2008 at 1:03 AM  

Awesome ! right thing to do , tell your friend Grey is so proud of her.

Wish i could do it , but i was very young ..*sigh*

September 11, 2008 at 1:04 AM  

DO TELL !

September 11, 2008 at 1:08 AM  

:O

No it's not over! Continue!

September 11, 2008 at 1:14 AM  

Yes we want to know more!!!

September 11, 2008 at 1:20 AM  

الحياة صارت سايبة

والقصة الي سردتيها تاكدي انها مو الاولى ولا الاخيرة

لكن








قوية هذي البنت











بس مجرمة على هالتشوهات الي سوتها فيها





بس شنو كانت ردة فقع الابو







الي جناة على نفسة وعلى
his girlfriend



بعض ابهات هالايام يبون يتشببون
ويكون عندهم حريم مثل بناتهم

الله يستر من الي ياي
:)

September 11, 2008 at 1:30 AM  

Her father? Not yours? I'm confused...

September 11, 2008 at 1:35 AM  

noo, the most important part is NOT over!

Yaaaa waaaaaaaila itha he freaked out on her, yeste7ee 3ala wayha oo yenche3em lol

September 11, 2008 at 1:39 AM  

6ab3an!!

September 11, 2008 at 1:44 AM  

WTF girlsFight ! *wanasa*
mm is that true eshd3wa wela bs 89a? tara etha 9j 3yal testahel akthar mn 6ag :/

September 11, 2008 at 1:45 AM  

WHAAAAT???

September 11, 2008 at 1:45 AM  

weeh ok I just read part one. Bas ambay zain itsawi, I seriously don't blame her.

and yess what was her father's reaction?

September 11, 2008 at 1:48 AM  

AAAAAGGUUUUHHHH we already know she hit her!!!! What did daddy doooooo...

This is better than mosalsalat irmothan il maskha!!!!

September 11, 2008 at 1:58 AM  

more please more!

September 11, 2008 at 2:03 AM  

UMBAAAAAAAY!! OMMGGG!! zain sawaytay feeeeeha (whoever wrote this!) she deserves more.. yezaha waqal min yezaha! ;p 3afia 3alaich walla u got the courage to beat the shit out of her!

please dont tell me her dad turned tables!

September 11, 2008 at 2:05 AM  

She needs to be admitted to a psychiatric unit as soon as possible! What her father did does not, in anyway, justify what she did. Sometimes I wish I was a police officer!

September 11, 2008 at 2:07 AM  

the answer to that and any further questions like that in future posts is YESF. alwaysf yesf.

more!!!!

September 11, 2008 at 2:08 AM  

No no the exciting part isn't over! We want to hear more!

September 11, 2008 at 2:10 AM  

OK is this a true story, cause if it is you should be ashamed of yourself, and rather blame your father not the poor woman. If he was not such a weak person he would not have succumbed to her in the first place. Nice written post by the way, so what happens next?

September 11, 2008 at 2:15 AM  

OK i did not see the first post obviously this is a true story! Nevertheless I insist on the fact that you can not stop the family falling apart irrespective of how many GF you will be slapping except if you are looking at a wrestling carreer. Thing is I can not justify your fathers actions, on the other hand you do not know what problems are your parents facing and you might be fighting for a lost cause, when couples drift apart the only way to resolve it is through open communication. Your line action of action and I am sorry to say are immature and selfish.

September 11, 2008 at 2:28 AM  

yes we wanna know;p

September 11, 2008 at 2:30 AM  

carry on.. i feel that the best part is yet to come...

September 11, 2008 at 2:44 AM  

amethyst
inshallah

Purg
LOL
i like the white trash image

shoosha
wait n see

batoul.a
7adha gad3a!

pinkish
inshallah

ansam
he wasnt smiling

journal entry
inshallah

nemo
k ill continue

m
k

manu
inshallah

September 11, 2008 at 2:46 AM  

jouja
ill tell u asap

chirp
ok ill tell u

grey
ill pass the msg on

anon + anon
will do!

jacqui
inshallah!

manalq8
saybah oo bas!
tesm3een mu9ayb elnass et6egeen 3ala rasich!

irise
did u read part one?!
its not about me.. im just telling the story as it was told to me by the actual gf beater

swair
elmafrooth!

yazeed
ok!

p-ella
lilasaf its true

ruby woo
i dont blame her either

daddys girl
real life is always better than mosalsalat

September 11, 2008 at 2:55 AM  

peony
min 3yooni

omtanoo7
ee wallah ana ba3ad gelt yzaha!

hasan.b
3alamic hal yomain bs tabe et7athif elawadem eb psychiatric units !

mrm
7ather!

shaykhoon
inshallah

hellraiser
ill make sure to get ur point of view across
bs as they say ele eeda bel may moo nafs ele eeda belnar.
we all react differently

um-mit3ib
inshaallah

lone rangeress
will do asap

September 11, 2008 at 3:02 AM  

lol looks like I'm the only here who doesn't want to hear about. I just think its too depressing and not really amusing to hear about other people's personal problems.

September 11, 2008 at 4:02 AM  

Omg plzzz complete it. ta7amst to know her dad's reaction. bs 9ara7a malh waih egoolha shay. ho ely bedaaa :S

September 11, 2008 at 4:04 AM  

Eshda3wa complete the story, or face my anger!
I like it!

September 11, 2008 at 4:15 AM  

R U REALLY HONESTLY ASKING IF WE ANOTHER PART

HONESTLY


DUDE THID PART NOW

BEDOON KLAM YLA

September 11, 2008 at 4:25 AM  

DUUUDE!!! THE REACTION!! WHATS THE REACTION!!!

September 11, 2008 at 5:28 AM  

wow its been less than 12 hours and looks how many people are following ur story - yallah 3ad

im getting all kinds of mental images - lakin my favourite ineh howa yin6am wala ygool shay oo ehya tibda2 3ad t7a9il kil ili tabeeh mineh bas 3ashan ehwa 5ayif tit7acha jidam il bait. LOOOOL

September 11, 2008 at 8:50 AM  

this post is very cathartic!!! YES WAIN IL REACTION!!

September 11, 2008 at 9:13 AM  

OMG OMG OMG !!
I didn't know inna aku chthi bil kwait..
please continue !

September 11, 2008 at 9:28 AM  

LAAA2 LAA2 KAMLAAY KAMLAAYYYY plzz $::$:$

September 11, 2008 at 11:02 AM  

Abeh :/ kamlay!

September 11, 2008 at 12:19 PM  

yesssss !! kamlaaaaay !

September 11, 2008 at 1:42 PM  

Its sad to see that the girl's family is falling apart and she will get some satisfaction from this, at least she did something. I hope somehow her family gets thru this.. I don't even know what possible action her father can have..

September 11, 2008 at 1:58 PM  

more more more ....

September 11, 2008 at 2:56 PM  

Ana garait part 2 gbl part 1 lol. :\ Inzain eeeh kmlyy esh9ar?

September 11, 2008 at 3:25 PM  

sushi
the girl was actually very proud of herself when she told me the story

layla
ee sawad allah waiha 3ala hal mawqef

linus
lala kela ela ur anger!

balqees
DUDE
alright!

eulaila
lol
inshallah

3anooda
LOL
inshallah lazim akhale shway time for anticipation!

princess
yayatkom bel6reej

houliee
wama khafeya a3tham

abi omi
inshallah

ra-1
7ather

cat
tamren amer

marzouq
it is sad!
ppl do things and never think abt the consequences (referring to the father)

m.j.kout
inshallah inshallah inshallah

September 11, 2008 at 3:35 PM  

I WANNNNA KNOW!!hehehehe;p

September 11, 2008 at 3:43 PM  

DID U REALLY?!!!!!!!!

daaaaaaaaamn ma9addeh channa mosalsal XD ok kamly plz!

September 11, 2008 at 3:52 PM  

zain sawat! baredat chabdha!!!
i want to know the rest!! pleaseeee!!

September 11, 2008 at 4:55 PM  

oh it is not excited anymore,im sorry about it eshd3wa.

September 11, 2008 at 5:31 PM  

Want to know NOW!

September 11, 2008 at 6:17 PM  

ako enough anticipation yallah 3ad kamlay

September 12, 2008 at 12:31 AM  

a7san.. tstahel!!

Continue the story please :)

September 12, 2008 at 1:38 AM  

the father needs some beating as well !

September 12, 2008 at 1:56 AM  

meemzz
im gna tell u !

fastidious
yeah she really did !

smarties
inshallah

p-ella
its ok

intlxpat
ill tell u asap!

3anooda
wallah i will

aurous
ee 7adha testahal!

zaboo6a
he sure does

September 12, 2008 at 2:13 AM  

9ij wila story?

September 12, 2008 at 12:33 PM  

exciting! waiting for part 3

September 12, 2008 at 1:16 PM  

OMG. please do continue..!!

September 12, 2008 at 7:14 PM  

OK now she is one tough girl. I like her she has a good and thoughtful personality ^^

And Yes the Father reaction, and the father ma lega ela mervat :P

September 12, 2008 at 11:47 PM  

marqadoosh
9ij

big pearls
very soon

dreamgirl
will do

g
shayf sawad allah waiha

September 13, 2008 at 1:44 AM  

YES I DO!!

I can't wait!!

September 16, 2008 at 8:08 PM  

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